dying in my tv chair (read)

I’ve been playing around with Mac’s GarageBand to lay down some backing music to perform one of my poems to. It took me a couple of hours to figure it all out and here’s the results:

Dying in My TV Chair

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Lydia
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Ok Clay-this is my a go at remembering my spam eaten comment!

I was basically just saying how much I liked this piece. Think it really works with the music-very mellow and the spoken lead in adds to that effect. I especially liked your description of your teacher-the pea green skirt and varicous veins-gentle and vivid at the same time.

Also liked the air hotess piece. Really well observed. It made me think of the last flight I took and I could really see you there on the plane!

Good stuff,

Lydia

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